Sorry, but no
Critisism:
dont import video to flash, even if it is 3d i wont look good
the game idea dosent attract me as a player since character/game development seems kinda akward when you play a huge battleship
Tips:
if your doing a game, dont focus your time on graphics; Create a working prototype first, then do the graphics
this game idea would suit better as a defend your castle(boat) style of game
post trailers and prototypes at newgrounds alpha instead of in the portal