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puss ;)

If you are a beginner, dont do tutorials

please work on your skills and do a tutorial wich covers a subject that havent been covered allready.

NG dont need these kind of tutorials.
this is just a waste of NG serverspace/bandwidth

do a tutorial in a year or so, when you have learnt to eaither animate or code

getts really annyoing

how many times does she say flash mx!?

and that background static electricity sound thingy.. it getts really repditive

you should also try to bring some more quality animation to this, and it might pass the bar

Repost

where are my whistle?

Sorry, but no

Critisism:
dont import video to flash, even if it is 3d i wont look good

the game idea dosent attract me as a player since character/game development seems kinda akward when you play a huge battleship

Tips:
if your doing a game, dont focus your time on graphics; Create a working prototype first, then do the graphics

this game idea would suit better as a defend your castle(boat) style of game

post trailers and prototypes at newgrounds alpha instead of in the portal